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[Generic Protagonist #1]

Lawltastic

Two things that really stood out for me (I don't know why)
1. He goes down the stairs to reach the top
2. I would read ahead in the subtitles only to find a spelling error which I thought was wrong until you read it. (motorcicle, knoiw, etc)
And I do hope that you titled this #1 for a reason.

drodZILiA responds:

I titled it #1 because it is the first episode.

[Wind in the wires]

Well done

I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this flash. I enjoyed it :D

celestrial-hardrave responds:

I'm very glad ^__^ thank you !